<?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
<rss version="2.0" xmlns:content="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/content/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/">
	<channel>
		<title>Story writing</title>
		<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/-t1.htm</link>
		<description>In this section you can start your adventure!</description>
		<lastBuildDate>Fri, 27 Feb 2009 22:26:55 GMT</lastBuildDate>
		<ttl>10</ttl>
		<image>
			<title>Story writing</title>
			<url>http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/90/logo1wh9.png</url>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/-t1.htm</link>
		</image>
		<item>
			<title>On a more serious note...</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/on-a-more-serious-note-t726.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Sanctus-Malas</dc:creator>
			<description>I am going to write a story about a battle between 2 groups, the Atrum Unus, a organization bent on equalizing the galaxy, and are doing this in the form of killing the strongest and weakest of all worlds, and all of YOU. Sanctus is the head of the Atrum Unus, and this is set before The Broken Wing chapter, eventually leading him to be tossed out of Above. If you want your character to participate pleases send me a P.M with their stats and alignment.



By the way, if you want your character  ...</description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Fri, 27 Feb 2009 22:26:55 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/on-a-more-serious-note-t726.htm#9033</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/on-a-more-serious-note-t726.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>GREATEST STORY EVER!!!!</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/greatest-story-ever-t725.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Sanctus-Malas</dc:creator>
			<description>To read the the story go down











































































Keep going





















































































you're getting there









































































keep going









































































your  ...</description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Fri, 27 Feb 2009 06:45:32 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/greatest-story-ever-t725.htm#9029</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/greatest-story-ever-t725.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>The Broken Wing, A Mystery Unfolds</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/the-broken-wing-a-mystery-unfolds-t718.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Sanctus-Malas</dc:creator>
			<description>Ondreas flew to the earth, and slowly scanned his surroundings. There was no high levels on this island, and it was bare. Sighing, Ondreas spread his wings and prepared to launch of the ground, when he felt a sharp pain in his stomach. Gasping he fell to his knees.

No, not here, not now he thought, fighting the darkness in the edge's of his eyes, but fell to the ground and darkness took him.



Sanctus blocked a Ki blast with his sword and flew on towards Malas. Chuckling Malas teleported  ...</description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Wed, 18 Feb 2009 06:22:20 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/the-broken-wing-a-mystery-unfolds-t718.htm#8875</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/the-broken-wing-a-mystery-unfolds-t718.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>Let The Battle Begin</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/let-the-battle-begin-t710.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Mageta</dc:creator>
			<description>&quot;Bring It ON&quot; growls Fluub &quot;With Pleasure&quot; I joke, &quot;May I Go First&quot; I say while laughing &quot;Be my guest&quot; He says, I pull my hand up like im doing an Eraser Cannon a black ball appears then I yell &quot;DARKNESS CANNON&quot; I just throw the attack at Fluub but he just slighty moves to the left &quot;Hahahahahahaha You Can Do Better Than That&quot; He chuckles then he flys up to me and starts to kick 17X &quot;Owwwwwww&quot; I groan &quot;Horokanu Rush&quot;  ...</description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Wed, 11 Feb 2009 08:22:55 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/let-the-battle-begin-t710.htm#8470</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/let-the-battle-begin-t710.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>Let The Adventure Begin</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/let-the-adventure-begin-t706.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Mageta</dc:creator>
			<description>Mageta was flying in his Saiyan space ship around the Solar System like usual Bbut then his Scouter picked up a strong power level when he was flying past Earth, so he landed on the planet and at that moment he saw it standing infront of him was the power level so he started to hide his power level so the monster wouldent notice him but while he tryed to sneak back to his ship he heard &quot;Halt&quot;, Mageta froze &quot;Y-Y-Yes&quot; when I finally blurted it out, &quot;Who are you&quot; it  ...</description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Tue, 10 Feb 2009 10:04:22 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/let-the-adventure-begin-t706.htm#8429</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/let-the-adventure-begin-t706.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>Duel, the Strength of Chaos</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/duel-the-strength-of-chaos-t655.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Sanctus-Malas</dc:creator>
			<description>Ondreas drew his sword, and prepared to bring it down on the creatures head. However it spun around and its tail lashed out, Ondreas avoided it and severed the creatures tail, then kicked it in the face. The creature went spiraling into the air, and Ondreas spun around, and took aim.

&quot;Focus Beam&quot; he shouted and a thin beam of black energy with blue and red dots flew at the creature. It collided, and went straight through the creature. Slowly the creature fell from the sky, and hit  ...</description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Fri, 30 Jan 2009 01:45:55 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/duel-the-strength-of-chaos-t655.htm#7400</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/duel-the-strength-of-chaos-t655.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>A New Chapter</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/a-new-chapter-t246.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Nasisorico</dc:creator>
			<description>Although Hatigashi was still young, many encouraged him to try to become the Saiyan King. His power was so undeniable, it was likely that by the time he got older, he would become a Super Saiyan. He did not agree though, and spent most of his time training, becoming better, getting faster, and building up  his rage for the ones that took his adoptive father away just a short while ago. He was training one day when a stray energy beam came through the house that Hatigashi was given to. It was  ...</description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Mon, 03 Nov 2008 21:45:09 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/a-new-chapter-t246.htm#2578</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/a-new-chapter-t246.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>THE TUFFLES ARE INVADING</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/the-tuffles-are-invading-t646.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Nasisorico</dc:creator>
			<description><![CDATA[<font color="darkred">As announced by Hatigashi as he passed out, the Tuffles have gathered all of their forces and are now attacking the city of Vegeta with all their might. Hatigashi was able to thin their numbers, but is out of the action for now. What will happen?
<br />
If their are no Tuffle characters, people will have to try and make their own battles, as I did. If there are no Tuffle leaders, I'll try to simulate one.</font>]]></description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Wed, 28 Jan 2009 23:16:50 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/the-tuffles-are-invading-t646.htm#7203</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/the-tuffles-are-invading-t646.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>Arrival, Chaos Comes to Earth.</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/arrival-chaos-comes-to-earth-t626.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Sanctus-Malas</dc:creator>
			<description>Ondreas looked around the field he was in, puzzled.

How did I end up here he thought, then in a flash he remembered. That idiot Supreme Kai had pushed him out of the Other World, he must have fell to here. The instinct of Malas took over and in rage he fire a good deal of energy into the sky. By chance at that moment a shuttle flew by, and collided with the beam.

&quot;Whoops&quot; said Ondreas as the shuttle started hurtling to the ground, he prepared to dash and catch the shuttle before  ...</description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Mon, 26 Jan 2009 09:13:12 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/arrival-chaos-comes-to-earth-t626.htm#6869</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/arrival-chaos-comes-to-earth-t626.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>my story about being king day 1</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/my-story-about-being-king-day-1-t622.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Barson</dc:creator>
			<description>King Levy was going to make a speech to the public to the saiyans. When he did he said &quot;Our planet is the safest place and if we have a war we will stand and fight for the saiyans are the strongest race of all time and yet i hope you all becone supersaiyans to prove toeveyone we strong but i still don't understand why we the last saiyanshave to hide? so we all need to do is move this planet somewear near earth because of goku and vegeta the two's gretest hereos.</description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Sun, 25 Jan 2009 14:17:59 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/my-story-about-being-king-day-1-t622.htm#6807</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/my-story-about-being-king-day-1-t622.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>Abyss: Tale of a Saiyan</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/abyss-tale-of-a-saiyan-t588.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Abyss</dc:creator>
			<description>Catchy title eh?! eh eh?! Tale. Tail







Abyss wasnt always the strongest of Saiyans but he was one of the tallest. His height combined with his muscular body he got from the intense training regime gave him an impressing appearance but he knew he was no match for the Tuffle Soldiers in terms of powerlevel. Apart from that, the Tuffles used ranged weapons so he couldnt use his mastery of hand-to-hand combat to his advantage. So he decided to concentrate on his KI attacks and with that his  ...</description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Sat, 17 Jan 2009 22:57:35 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/abyss-tale-of-a-saiyan-t588.htm#6447</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/abyss-tale-of-a-saiyan-t588.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>Saiyan king/Tuffle king/more... sighn up</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/saiyan-king-tuffle-king-more-sighn-up-t610.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Barson</dc:creator>
			<description><![CDATA[Plz sigh up for eaither 
<br />
majin king,
<br />
Sayian king ,
<br />
tuffle king,
<br />
android king,
<br />
dragon king,
<br />
Animals king(such as oolong) 
<br />
Changlings king, 
<br />
Demon king,
<br />
 human lord,
<br />
namek lord,
<br />
 <u>When u sighn up plz give a SPEECH!!!!</u>]]></description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Sat, 24 Jan 2009 01:08:40 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/saiyan-king-tuffle-king-more-sighn-up-t610.htm#6666</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/saiyan-king-tuffle-king-more-sighn-up-t610.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>I think it's time for some events</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/i-think-it-s-time-for-some-events-t603.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Nasisorico</dc:creator>
			<description><![CDATA[Post events that you think should be going on right now. I have two
<br />
A. Tuffle Leader
<br />
B. Saiyan King
<br />
We will decide by popular opinion. Basically, if you like my idea, say so]]></description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Thu, 22 Jan 2009 02:02:47 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/i-think-it-s-time-for-some-events-t603.htm#6591</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/i-think-it-s-time-for-some-events-t603.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>Part 1</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/part-1-t490.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>ssgohanf8</dc:creator>
			<description>Please gives constructive criticism that won't make me cry, lol.



*Birds chirping*

   Quantar: *YAWN* &quot;Shut up, you stupid birds! Yellow blast!&quot; *Fires the green attack through the window, shattering it and making the birds... extra crispy* &quot;No! Not another window! Curse you Non-Streak CapsuleCleaner! Oh well, it's not like I have to pay for any windows. I will fly somewhere and rip someone else's window out of the wall without a problem.&quot; *Feet slowly lift off the ground  ...</description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Sun, 28 Dec 2008 04:15:25 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/part-1-t490.htm#5508</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/part-1-t490.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>Gehn Black - The Saiyan Cyborg</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/gehn-black-the-saiyan-cyborg-t473.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Serak</dc:creator>
			<description>I was not actually planning on posting this here, or anywhere honestly, since the most of the people here have the writing abilities of a shovel. Or worse. 



I've just got nowhere better to put it, and I'd like some second opinions since this is probably the largest writing project I've ever done and I want to make it as good as possible.



And yes, I realize it's not related with the (crappy) Forum RPG here, but it still seemed like the best place to put it.



So, this is the Prologue  ...</description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Thu, 25 Dec 2008 03:19:34 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/gehn-black-the-saiyan-cyborg-t473.htm#5439</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/gehn-black-the-saiyan-cyborg-t473.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>Chapter Two</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/chapter-two-t583.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Zetetsu</dc:creator>
			<description>The King's Assassination



Two more month's have gone by for Zetetsu, and Nakae. They both have been training as hard as they can since the death of Yoshisuke. When they are training one day outside of Zetetsu's house. The scouter starts to whirl and the voice goes off by itself saying *Vrr, News for all saiyans, please come to Vegeta City's Main Square.* After hearing this Zetetsu and Nakae nod to each knowing this is urgent. They lift off the ground and blast off towards the Main Square  ...</description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Sat, 17 Jan 2009 07:39:16 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/chapter-two-t583.htm#6386</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/chapter-two-t583.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>Mageta's Adventure Part 2</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/mageta-s-adventure-part-2-t569.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Mageta</dc:creator>
			<description>Mageta And His Brother Bageta Fly Off To The New Capsule Corp To Get It Analyzed To Find Out Whos Tail It Is. The Lady At The Counter Said &quot;Im Sorry You'l Find Out In 3 Days&quot; And Mageta Says &quot;AWWWWWW I Want To Fight This New Guy&quot; You'll Just Have to Wait Says Bageta&quot; To be Continued</description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Wed, 14 Jan 2009 02:23:32 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/mageta-s-adventure-part-2-t569.htm#6233</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/mageta-s-adventure-part-2-t569.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>DragonBall AF part3(Saga 1 still)Preview</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/dragonball-af-part3saga-1-stillpreview-t507.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Barson</dc:creator>
			<description>Barson was still looking for dragonball he need one more but while he was looking he met this girl desiree he evnyualy married her and had a child named Levi David Jackson (my real name)</description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Wed, 31 Dec 2008 22:57:46 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/dragonball-af-part3saga-1-stillpreview-t507.htm#5632</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/dragonball-af-part3saga-1-stillpreview-t507.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>DBAF......... part 2</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/dbaf-part-2-t461.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Barson</dc:creator>
			<description>one day Barson was walking through a nice woods but i noticed an orange ball on the ground it had four stars in it and i thought to myself &quot;Omg its the four star four dragonball&quot; i have to tell capsul corp&quot; so i immediently flow off andf went as fast as i could. When i got there i asked  goku jr  if he has a dragon radar and he says &quot;yes here you go but why do u need it ?&quot; &quot;i need it for bragonballs,there back on earth and im gonna wish goku and eveyone who he was  ...</description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Fri, 19 Dec 2008 14:34:06 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/dbaf-part-2-t461.htm#5318</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/dbaf-part-2-t461.htm</guid>
		</item>
		<item>
			<title>His first battle.</title>
			<link>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/his-first-battle-t468.htm</link>
			<dc:creator>Swordman</dc:creator>
			<description>Swordman was walking around the city. It was a windy day and the leaves were making a scraping sound along the roads. Swordman liked stepping on those, but right when he was about to step on one, he heard something...something demonic.



&quot;No...Brawl's apprentice is weak...we take him now.&quot; It was a man in an ally.



Swordman went into the ally, only sensing danger.



&quot;Hey...Im not that weak...&quot; Swordman said.



Swordman gulped as the two men walked towards him.



The  ...</description>
			<category>Story writing</category>
			<pubDate>Sun, 21 Dec 2008 06:24:02 GMT</pubDate>
			<comments>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/his-first-battle-t468.htm#5372</comments>
			<guid>http://db-universe.forumotion.com/story-writing-f17/his-first-battle-t468.htm</guid>
		</item>
	</channel>
</rss>