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Post  Cress on Tue Dec 16, 2008 8:50 am

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Cress awoke in dawn it was still too early but he didn't care he grabbed his things he put on his black gi and then he put in his scouter along with wristbands and his boots and he cracks his neck he was alittle tired he was new here it was a weird place to him he walked out the door and then he jumped up testing his will to fight the advanced gravity and he then walked over to the store it wasn't open yet but he knocked anyway to his surprise someone answered they began a small convirsation Cress:hey whats the news lately?
Store owner: well surviving technicians or whatever you call them killed some low class saiyans northeast they must be getting stronger...
Cress: I wanna check this out got any weights?
Store owner: Ya sure and best of luck here the good pair boots and a wrist band and a sash
Cress puts on the weights and he begins to fly off he goes northeast as he had been given directions he begins to see blood scattered around and seeing bodys he goes down to examine when a beam of energy is thrown at him from the south he turns around to see the beam but it was too late the beam glowed in the darkness as he stared in horror as it came within inches as he became scared as it pierced through his arms and hit his chest immense pain he felthe jerked and the beam was directed at the ground and it caused a explosion and he was send toward the person who shot it and he saw this moment to strike and his oppenent knew also and cress grabbed his arm and then he send his knee to the persons jaw it cracked as it hit it barely had a effect he was getting alittle anger as his lungs and rips where blown away by a hand one of his lungs collapsed and he was thrown onto the ground he was hurt badly blood was spread inside of his chest, he was dieing he had to cut open his chest but he would probably die anyone if he survived he knew his powerlevel would grow but he was prepared for the end he staggered to get up when he was kicked atleast 50 feet away from him and he landed on a spike he just barely was able to grab it when it began to open he fell in and landed on stairs he was in serious pain at this point he began to roll down them to find something of use when he rolled onto a person with no tail he knew it was of a different race he was about to gag for breath when he blanked out and then he awoke to see a scientist looking at him while i was in glass with water surrounding him.



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Cress(weights) : 2756
Cress (battle damaged) : 1038
Cress (in the tank) 273
Cress (after he wakes up which is in the end) 7395

Mystery person : 10928
Mystery person (beam) : 15732
Random defeated and died people : 1-100
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Post  Abyss on Tue Dec 16, 2008 11:50 am

Cool, but try to add points . and comma's , and such, dunno how you call it in english but its kinda hard to read, apart from that, cool story!

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Post  Cress on Tue Dec 16, 2008 10:14 pm

Cress looked at the scientist trying to figure out what was going on his body was still alittle wounded he had trouble seeing so it was hard to see what was happening he could feel his body getting stronger but not very fast he remembers how long it has been...1 and a half weeks his vision became good again and he started to look around to see he was naked embarrased he closed his eyes and threw his arms out blowing through the glass and hitting the scientist destroying the place but putting it in lock down and a shield came over the glass he didn't have much time he looked around the room for some clothes he saw another door it said "Armor room" he blew through this one also to find it was like a maze of battle armor scouters and Gi's he got a black gi put on some weighed boots and gloves he found and also put on some black battle armor and got a scouter and put it on and he found a mirror also he though to himself how cool it looks he wet down his black hair and tried to change it but the spiked up hair and 2 bangs just a little away from his eyes he shrugged and decided to look around.
he punched through the door in the scientists place but before he did he put him in the healing tank to look how muscular he had became he smiled and flexed his muscles then he remembered the door the punch was a medium sized whole the size of his fist and he sent a kick towards the door breaking part of the wall and crushing the door into half of its size he laughed and went through the gap he found atleast 20 guards there he smiled and appeared behind one of them he didn't know how he did it but he ignored it and elbowed the guard he went flying into the metal glass and got stuck but he was probably died and he sweepkicked one and then got up and send his leg toward ones face then the others started re-acting and they cupped their hand he had some behind them he moved behind them in the blink of an eye and he began to prepare his destructive gun he crouched and a aura bursts around him cutting through the ground and pushing the guards away and bending some of the metal on the poles and doors and sides of the wall the guards now had their charge ready but they awaited a signal to launch Cress took this too his advantage he put his arms to his side and began to charge then sent his arms into the air and spread them out and then he began to collect energy from living things around him then he cupped his hands to pour his energy into it, it was ready the signal came too fire and his power on his scouter was over 15000 and the guards he now saw them tailess and researched them as tsujufuns he scanned their powerlevel to be all together it was over 19000! he might not win this but he was not done charging and powering up to be poured all of his potiental into this hispowerlevel was over 23000 now amazed him panting he unleashes their beam as they did lashing through the tsujufuns and blowing them all to well everyone their insides went everywhere but they where fried but my beam so i was not hit and their beams clashed with mine it was pretty even but Cress was winning his energy dawned and he threw his arms down onto the ground and then threw it up and threw a charged blast in his hand into his beam making it move extremely fast
it hit theres with 3 waves 2 strong points and 1 down point he was now about to blow through most of the tsujufuns he hit them sending most of them to their deaths the remainning where wounded but the general stood strong from the hit he appeared to cress's side and karate chopped his arm, breaking it he yelped in pain and he became anger and he back handed the general and he send a kick toward his gut then he expanded his muscles 1x and then he send his hand into and out of the generals gut and then his jaw rip knee and then he expanded 2x and his powerlevel doubled and he sent his arm straight through the general and then threw him and moved his hand over to his wounded body with blood lust in his eyes a extremely powerful green orb as big as his head came out of his hand and he whispered "Omega blaster..." and the orb shot at him at an amazing speed quicker then the instant move technique and more powerful then a 150% powered Destructive Gun it rained ashes and the entire planet shook but he never moved he began to calm to figure what had happened he began to ran getting thrown into the air at times and landed heavily getting hurt alot and he ran into a huge chamber with more then 200 tsujufuns and he ran right past them thinking he would probably get killed and some how appeared out of the chamber into another room through a even bigger door and a throne sat there and also a girl he scanned her powerlevel it was just about his he began to think this is not a safe place but there was no one else in he walked cautionsly toward he he too a deep breath and he came within five feet to her it appeared she was sleeping he thought must be tiring to be queen or king... he began to walk away when a large sound was heard and he felt blinding pain covering his body he was lunged forward he got up wounded he yelled in frusteration and he threw off his gloves and his boots he cracked whatever they where standing on he could not really tell what it was but he knew his powerlevel had risen more but he threw his scouter off along with his armor he was going all-out against her she appeared behind him he tracked her moves and blocked a punch and a kick with his leg and then he threw her but she grabbed him and they where both thrown forward sending multiple kicks and punchs and also a ki blast or two and they exploded together and after a hour they where both covered in cuts and bruises he coughed and she knew this was a strike she sent her elbow toward his head it was a hit a crack could be heared through the doors all over the fortress he was bleeding from the head and one of his eyes had to stay shut and his broken arm dragged him down aswell when she sweep kicked him and then stomped on his knee when he was on the ground he knew he was beaten but there was still a moment of hope he became angry like when he used the omega blaster technique he got up without getting hurt his hair had grown longer in this form of anger and his hair was spiky and his bangs where longer now and she blocked a incoming attack of his fist but his muscles expanded without the technique and he punched straight through and broke both of her hands and damaged her badly and send a kick toward her legs and her head by jumping and spinning she was kicked without a block and she went flying into the wall broken her legs her skull was ok but her arms where broken also he walked toward her and placed his hand on her neck and he charge a omega blaster with his other hand he was deciding her fate but with each fate one decides a toll is taken and he aimed at the door he launched it now at 200% of a destructive gun and it blew through the door and obliberated everything in the way and he zanzokened all the way toward the tank of water the scientist was ok now and out of it he grabbed it along with all the wires everything and blew into the planets crust and sealed himself in with some air getting in and he hooked up the regeneration tank and placed her in it and then left she would remember and come out eventually and he then fainted on the spot from the epic battle he would lay there for a long time not awakening until he heard a noise but none came he was almost died it was a miracle he was alive and he wanted to rest for the time being he was calm down but his hair didn't change much akwardly.



Cress beginning :8263
Cress (weights) :5029
Cress (destructive gun 100%) : 24857
Cress (battle damaged) :2048
Cress (battle damaged all-out) :11048
Cress (end) :9307

Tsujufuns :1000-400
General tsujufun :2039

Princess tsujufun (epic story later on so she will be back ;D) :4927
Princess tsujufun (battle damaged) :194
Princess tsujufun (end) :5103
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Post  Cress on Tue Dec 16, 2008 11:07 pm

sorry i dont really like to use commas and periods ill try and put more though
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Post  Cress on Wed Dec 17, 2008 5:35 am

awoke being fully healed his power increased yet again and his skills powers everything increased he was stronger then ever he decided to practice the instant movement technique so he began to use it he named it zanzoken and he practiced it until he was back at the city his armor his gi most of his clothes where torn he went directly towards the shopkeeper who was now a innkeeper and a shopkeeper
Cress:i went there and i figured alot out...
Inn keeper:your hair changed...weird anyway what did you figure out and what happened your a mess
Cress: i found a base of theirs a saw a queen i saw general i defeated atleast 50 of the soldiers a general and a mystery warrior i dont know anything about he is almost 2 times my power...i barely survived
Innkeeper: dang you need to round up some people and stop this ill get to work on it here you can stay here and have some free stuff for this great discovery
Cress:alright cya in a while

With the information cress has spread he appeared at their entrance using his fullpower zanzoken he placed his hand and destroyed the door along with part of the cave he walked in and destroyed atleast 7 guards and he walked toward the huge door he rips through it and walks into training room with immense gravity due to machines and artifical people sparring them he was strained in the gravity it was over 3 times planet vegetas gravity he was thrown to the gravity and he struggled to get up and he was able to get up and he found that the training distracted them and he attacked one of them grabbing his elbow and letting him get hit by the artificial person then he lifted his hand and used the gravity along with his muscle to crack the training persons neck killing him then he kicked through him and also went through the artificial life form and he then ignored the others and battled 2 guards at the door and he just simply shot a blast through their heart and got through the even bigger door to reveal them making battle plans over the city of vegeta he was so much less strained from the gravity and he had killed 4 things in it he zanzokened above the table they where discussing on and he lifted his hand and he whispered "get rocked fools.." and he shot the table and the ceiling caved in on them but the queen shot a ki beam clearing the rocks and he landed where the table once was and looked around them and they saw his tail and knew what it all ment
he looked around and began to speak "you all are doomed i have given the information to the other saiyans and im leading a full head on assault on you you'll die in a matter of days im only here to give this information to you so i can let you prepare so i can have some fun...so be prepared!" the generals captains and other ranks begin to talk about this and Cress getting alittle annoyed he puts up his hand and he begins to charge and he then he yells the words "RENEGADE BOMBER!!!" and he begins to blow through everyone of them and the queen at the farthest end of the table was blown away also but not killed he halts and he prepares a destructive gun and he aims at the huge door and he unleashes his fury on all on the other side he would obliberate anyone that moved the machines would not be destroyed because he would try and steal one to get himself some better trainning he walked over to the princess and asked what her name was
it was just common sense for a saiyan to know a name before their death and she was in alot of pain and she was able to muster out the words "crystal" and she opened one eye too see his hand facing her and she closed her eyes and flinched preparing for her destruction but it didn't come her hair uncovered her face and he saw how pretty she was he though and decided killing isn't right she had too much to live for and he began to walk away and she opened her eye again too see him walking away and she fainted at that moment from exhaustion and he walked over to the gravity machine and simulator and took them and he went back to the place where he had found the armory and he began to salvage as much stuff he could and he went back to the city of vegeta and he had enough money to buy a big house out side of the city it was owned by tsujufuns once so he bought it and he began to settle down in it he trained in 2 times vegetas gravity against 3 simulations he ducked at ones kick and sent his leg toward their remainning leg breaking it then strained in the gravity and jumped but missed his chance and landed on his back and then was hit by 2 of the simulations kicks he began to think of crystal for the upcoming battle would he take their life or betray the saiyans he could not figure out what to do thinking she would probably team him in the battle he pictured a general and her fighting him he swerved missing a punch then doing a back flip and ducking using his senses to see someone elbowing their back and then he lifted his leg kicking them in the face throwing them into a wall and sweep kicked the other one and thrown and propelled them into the floor with his elbow sorta like a body slam and he began to kick and hit the air flip kick duck multiple punches jump hit the ground with the his leg then he threw his ki and it hit his back and then he charged a destructive gun 250% and it began to fly around manipulated it then his hair grew but it would change back and he began to charge a omega blaster at 250% and he zanzokened in front of both of them and the room was parshilly destroyed as he was hit all over his body and he fell to the ground and he began to train even hard he grabbed weights and changed the gravity to 3 times and he began to punch the air and then he weights in his hand and he was determined to go all the way too 2500 punches and he then began to count 1...2...3..4..5...204...205...206...792..793...1587...1588...1589...2497...2498...2499....25-..250-...2500...
and he then walk over to a place to put your legs while he hanged over and he placed his hands over his neck and he began to train his chest and ab area by lifting himself up and stopping he went too 3000 and then he fell down to the ground and he knew his powerlevel was atleast 25% of his original power and he set the artificial sparring partner to 15000 powerlevel its max from what he knows and the moment it spawns it appears behind him and sends a kick toward his back he gets hit and then zanzokens behind him and they begin a zanzoken off trying to hit each other struggling and then his hair spikes and his bangs by his eyes grow and his power skyrockets and he sends one punch toward the fighter and he hits him and ki is knocked out of his artificial body it flows out from his back as he is hit into the air and he launches his newest technique as powerful as his omega blaster attack Finishing Flash straight through the enemy and blowing through the roof and he bolts his machines to the ground and he falls into his bed and he rests until he is all rested up and ready to go into the city.

Cress beginning :10379
Cress battle damaged :7828
Cress end (zenkai + trainning) :15782
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Post  ssgohanf8 on Wed Dec 17, 2008 5:48 am

O_O AND I THOUGHT ZETETSU'S WERE BIG!!! Any thought's Hiyoto? Lol.

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Post  Cress on Wed Dec 17, 2008 7:40 am

ssgohanf8 wrote:O_O AND I THOUGHT ZETETSU'S WERE BIG!!! Any thought's Hiyoto? Lol.
whos hiyoto XD
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Post  Cress on Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:15 am

Awake he was getting some extra trainning done he was practicing his ki he was probably the strongest saiyan around this time he walked out the door to see soldiers gathering in the court yard and a saiyan dressed in move armor then others thought to be the leader began to march and the others followed i grabbed my pack and i flew over and landed in front of then and they holded and he raised his hand and began to talk Cress : what's going on here?
Saiyan captain : someone took command and we are assaulting the base our leader told us about
Cress : what? im the one that found the base ever sense i spotted it my powerlevel has raised over 10000...
Saiyan Captain : your strong but someone beat you too leadership not my problem move NOW! before i blow your head off and walk over your body

looks at the saiyan captain and holds his hand up and then he blew his body away and hit a few saiyans and then he looked at the others and they started to run and he began to zanzoken toward the base of the tsujufuns which was the opposite way oddly and then he blew through the ground as he fly even faster and he came to a halt as the guard of 50 people sat there readying for a assault and he started talking to them too Cress : i need to see the queen NOW!
Guard captain : get in these chains and ill send you to see her
Cress : fine...if you attack me ill kill though

he was shackled heavily and he practicly moved the guards with zanzoken and he came to the door they put in a password and he was already down the stairs he came to the big door and opened it with his head and the gravity he was already use to but the other guards where not he simply walked through and opened another door and he came to the thrown where it was in ruins and many people where building and cleaning and she was not there and he let the guards take him to where she was there by one of the statues by her thrown there was a door and they opened it and unshackled him and threw him inside it was like skydiving but without the parachute and he landed on a spike but his powerlevel made his body strong and he accidently broke it he fell off he though the guards where trying to kill him when he saw a arena and there was someone trainning and a full blown place of equipment and he landed on the arena whoever they where they were surrounded by gravity and he walked into it and fell to the ground he layed there and he had control over his ability when he gets angry and his hair spiked and he got up still getting use to the gravity he stretched and approached the people there there was a girl and a boy he remember the gravity...teaming him he walked closer and they where trainning they didn't notice him he saw it was crystal and someone else he grabbed their arms and they looked amazed as they saw him they tried to get loose but it didn't work until he let go and they went flying and they appeared behind him and they both sent a kick and he kicked one and grabbed the other and then the guy sent a punch and crystal got loose and kicked his jaw and he was getting hit but having no effect he simply throws crystal and then punches through the guy and throws him onto the ground and walks up to her and puts his hand to her and a ki ball forms and he begins to talk

Cress : the names cress and i see your going into war?
Crystal : well cress..your going to die anyway and i gave no such order
Cress : well i saw saiyans moving around i killed some and your troops are advancing to vegeta
Crystal : i dont care what you think you killed my friend and you obliberated my room and my generals captains and why do you keep coming back?
Cress : that does not apply to you so dont ask
Crystal : tell me you separate my bonds and your breaking my empire
Cress : i care how??
Crystal : you should be ashamed
Cress : ... i already am i am trying to make this right this time not to kill
Crystal : ya believe a saiyan i did that once and he broke my heart and almost killed me
Cress : that was not me so you cant blame me
Crystal : no i dont blame you i blame your race!
Cress : well not all saiyans are mad for power!!!!
Crystal : ya who?
Cress : me...i forgot about power when i was 17
Crystal : like when you fought me?
Cress : maybe...
Crystal : pitiful saiyan i like no body
Cress : not my point
Crystal : sure if you wanna help then leave
Cress : how do i get out then...i landed on a spike its too dark
Crystal : leave and go to the other world...
Cress : ?!?!

Crystal zanzokens above him and sends a kick toward his shoulder it hit but had no effect cress sat there getting hit multiple times and he says "my power is to enrage i am already 15000 and if i enrage it goes over 30000 and i can control it mostly you cant touch me" continues trying to hit him and she sends both of her hands toward his chest and pushed him back a few inches and then she cups her hands and her power skyrockets to 15000 and then she unleashes the beam at him and he grabs the beam and throws it with his wrist and it explodes in mid air not hurting him she knew his heart was bended to hers so she knew he had one weakness she sent multiple ki blasts and he closed his eyes to enjoy the breeze from the explosions and she zanzokened to him and she put her hands on his chest but he didn't feel it and she leaned toward him inside the smoke and she pushed her lips to his and she began to kiss him his power lowered because this was his first kiss his hair stopped and it stopped growing and his powerlevel went down he could feel his power lowering he could feel his power going 500% below his he probably would not survive this next wave of attacks he new that he fell in love with crystal but he would rather die by her hand then be her enemy and they stopped and she blew him away and he went flying onto a spike and she yelled "EAT THE MOVE YOU ALMOST KILLED ME WITH...RENEGADE...BOMBER!!!" and her power went up as she sent multiple blast at him almost killing him and he fell down onto a spike it pierced his skin and it went through him and he fired a beam of energy to land inside the gravity arena bleeding to death...

Cress beginning :16039
Cress enraged : 31945
Cress battle damaged :1209
Cress (after kiss) :102 and dropping
Cress (if he is alive his power will be 21726)

Techniques cress learned so far : focus, (1/3 power increase along with highed stats and stuff) power down,expand 3x,omega blaster,finishing flash,power up,charge/blast,galactic gun (not yet used),destructive gun,sense,super sense,heal (like advanced healing),highed power(increasing everything because easier because of his super type), renegade bomber,explosive wave super and:D normal ;D, and now 2 types of anger 1 that makes your power rise and 2 that goes beyond even that AND MORE

Crystal : 8193
Crystal renegade bomber : 14058
Crystal after battle : 9013
Crystals friend :9184

TUNE IN NEXT TIME ON... Cress: the middle story!! Sad Surprised Mad Twisted Evil affraid Yay for DBU! cheers scratch lol!


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Post  Hiyoto on Wed Dec 17, 2008 7:50 pm

that was the longest sentence I've read but very good
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Post  Cress on Wed Dec 17, 2008 8:48 pm

thx its fun so i write one atleast everyday
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Post  azharuddin on Wed Dec 17, 2008 8:50 pm

Mate. i loved it. You should write more mate
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Post  Cress on Wed Dec 17, 2008 8:57 pm

im in the process of thinking up some ideas mate thanks for your support mate
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