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Abyss: My awesomely new character!

Post  Abyss on Sat Jan 17, 2009 11:18 pm

Race: Saiyan
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The Saiyan Abyss was born 20 years before the assasination of the Saiyan King.
The Saiyans were already entangled in a raging war with the Tuffles. Being born in a time of war and chaos formed his character. Unlike some people, who go crazy, Abyss developed an iron will, a strong determination and a refusal to give up. This combined with his typical Saiyan characterictics, could have made him a ruthless killing machine. But only 1 thing made this seemingly perfect son for Saiyan parents not so perfect at all. His Powerlevel. Abyss still holds the record of the weakest Saiyan ever born. His powerlevel wasnt even measurable with the advanced tuffle techniques that were still in Saiyan hands at that time. His father saw this son as a failure and he blamed Abyss. Abyss grew up in a, for saiyans, normal environment and despite his low powerlevel he had friends at school. Since Abyss was always the weakest of the whole group he rather studied the art of fighting instead of practising it.

As a young boy he always wanted to be a hero, a great fighter, someone to be looked up at. And at the age of 19, his wish became reality, but at a high cost. His village was attacked by Tuffles. Everybody died except Abyss. At this point his powerlevel was 100 but his supreme Battle Intelligence and tremendous speed made him a force to be reckoned with. Of course the Tuffles, guided by their scouters, underestimated him and Abyss could escape. While he fleed he felt angry and humiliated. He had to run, again. He promised himself to never let this happen again, and started his training. For a whole year all he did was training, meditating, eating and sleeping. Occasionally he studied fighting techniques to improve them and adapt them to his own style. His power grew enormously and he enjoyed a wide arsenal of techniques. He was ready, and just in time, the Tuffles killed the king and it was time he avenged his Father...

"Get ready you filthy Tuffles, the Prince of all Saiyans is back!"

Abyss flew of to start his journey


PL End: 20,000

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Post  ssgohanf8 on Sat Jan 17, 2009 11:28 pm

You make me want to continue writing my story and have my character come kill you. Smile Only a truely inspiring story can do that.

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Post  Abyss on Sat Jan 17, 2009 11:32 pm

Thanks! Well, Zetetsu inspired me to make a new one Smile
But you should continue too! We need some good stories going on XD

Not:

Yeah he killed 2 guys and then he wanted to go to the cinema, but his leg was cut off. Total bummer of course but hey, youre not allowed to bleed in the cinema. So he went home and died.

PL begin: 200000000000000
PL end: 0 (he was dead so duh)

And of course, with good stories its more fun to join and more people will hopefully join. FUN!

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Post  ssgohanf8 on Sat Jan 17, 2009 11:36 pm

Abyss wrote:
[color=#ff0000]PL begin: 200000000000000

PL end: 0 (he was dead so duh)
How'd his leg get cut off so easily?! WTF?! I would be cussing in H.F.I.L. if I had that power level and I went to the movies I trip and somehow I die from my leg being severed. Poor, poor guy.

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Post  Abyss on Sat Jan 17, 2009 11:40 pm

Thats exactly what I was thinking when people posted messages like that. So you!! Continue with the story, I will follow Zetetsu's btw

Oh and please tell me if you think its stupid if Im the Saiyan Prince. So I can laugh at you and ban you..

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Post  ssgohanf8 on Sat Jan 17, 2009 11:43 pm

No, I think it's unique that the prince would be so weak, and it makes it even more realistic that the king would kind of disown him for that reason, but what of your mother? You've only mentioned the king, and I'm sure your mom was... a LITTLE nicer, right? Or was she a kick butt fighter like Fasha?

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Post  Abyss on Sat Jan 17, 2009 11:46 pm

Meh, I think for Saiyans, women dont have alot to say, after all, they are weaker so why listen if they cant kill you? So theyre just for breeding XD. But seriously, dont you think, Saiyans are, after all, a bunch of savages. At least thats how I see it

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Post  ssgohanf8 on Sat Jan 17, 2009 11:47 pm

Well, Fasha's kind of nice. And when I was like 7 I had a crush on her, lol. Razz

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Post  Abyss on Sat Jan 17, 2009 11:54 pm

Lol, but yeah, maybe al women are like that. But meh, women are barely mentioned in the anime and manga, so I think they are all warriors, but weaker and of course, the king has the highest authority, and he cannot have a weak kid. Especially not in times of war, so the Queen had to let her kid go.

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Post  ssgohanf8 on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:03 am

Ah, that makes sense, good cover up. Smile

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Post  Abyss on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:08 am

Pfew, you almost got me there. My story is saved!! YAY

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Post  ssgohanf8 on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:24 am

Can I point something else out then? Lol.

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Post  Abyss on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:25 am

Sure, I like constructive critiscism

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Post  ssgohanf8 on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:30 am

I was joking but the reason I don't really write much, is because something ALAYS happens to my story, I just got finished with a long good one and now it's gone because of something this site keeps doig to me... sometimes I click off of the text spot or accidently miss the submit button, and it sends me to the topic, and I refuse to write it AGAIN! And I just don't think about putting it in notepad or anything... I hate this Sad I had an idea that was so totally awesome :'(

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Post  Abyss on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:33 am

The thing I always do, I Copy all and then press the submit button when writing long posts. But dont worry, write again, I posted this story 2 times too XD, I first had an all different idea but I liked this more and removed all and started over

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Post  ssgohanf8 on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:35 am

I don't think about the copy thing when I do it, so from now on I'll worte in notepad and copy it into the reply. Sad I'm keeping my awesome idea though.

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Post  Abyss on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:37 am

I do too! I always remember when I press submit, but then you can quickly copy it with CTRL+A, CTR+C. But you were a tuffle right? Or you going to make a new character? Oh I just rememberd I didnt post his looks and special attacks and all. MM youll see that in the first story post

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Post  ssgohanf8 on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:39 am

No, I was mostly human, either Nasiso or Tharsten is the Tuffle.

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Post  Abyss on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:41 am

Oh lol, yes that was Tharsten. Meh, you will have to figure a way how you, as a human will encounter me, the saiyan on Planet Vegeta XD. This RPG makes me wanna update the Character sheets. You have an idea what to add?

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Post  ssgohanf8 on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:49 am

No, but I'm already at another planet in this next part that I have so ha!

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Post  Abyss on Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:50 am

Ah ok,


POST IT! Imma start my story now..

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Post  ssgohanf8 on Sun Jan 18, 2009 1:05 am

I already posted some of my story if you hadn't noticed(because I think you were in France at the time) but it was short and I'm adding on.

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