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Post  Mageta on Tue Feb 10, 2009 1:04 pm

Mageta was flying in his Saiyan space ship around the Solar System like usual Bbut then his Scouter picked up a strong power level when he was flying past Earth, so he landed on the planet and at that moment he saw it standing infront of him was the power level so he started to hide his power level so the monster wouldent notice him but while he tryed to sneak back to his ship he heard "Halt", Mageta froze "Y-Y-Yes" when I finally blurted it out, "Who are you" it said "I-I-I am Mageta the Dark Saiya-Jin Prince" I finally said, "Who are you then" I wonder, "Me you don't Know who I am" "No" I say, "Oh well I am Omegae Fluub" He Says "Omega Fluub? sounds like a cold or somthing, But whatever lets fight" "Sure I will get to see how weak you are"..... To Be Continued
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Post  Abyss on Tue Feb 10, 2009 10:36 pm

Youre getting better! And you dropped the capitals XD
Nice improvements!

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Post  Mageta on Wed Feb 11, 2009 10:02 am

Yer I drop the capitals now say thanks to some guy from Dbz Vortex
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